
I will be honest, when I first looked at the PDF explaining what step one was, I didn’t think it sounded so serious. So, after reading the introduction and first chapter of our study guide, I jotted down dot points with key words thinking that was all I had to do. I’m not sure why, but at first I did not think the task was supposed to be so serious.
It was not until I looked at example’s from previous student’s as well as the draft’s that have already been submitted on some of my peer’s blogs that I realised just how serious it was supposed to be. Maybe I am still on holiday mode or still think I am in high school. Heck, it could even be the fact that this is my first task I have had to do for any of my units so far.
Long story short, and after multiple re-edits, I am very happy to submit the draft to the first part of this assignment. I would be so grateful if some of you could respond with feedback, positive or negative. I definitely need to be put on the right track… this is definitely not like my small-town high school.
I am still counting down for Friday when we FINALLY get our company!! Can not wait to see which company we all will have!
Dani 🙂

Hey Daniella,
I really love the layout of your blog, it’s gorgeous.
I read through your first draft for step one and its’s beautifully written, your reflections are well done. I can easily make sense of your thought process as you started the unit and your readings.
As Laura mentioned above, I’d love to see some more KCQ’s throughout. The exemplar assessment is a great way to see how the girls integrated their KCQ’s into their writing. It’s a completely new concept to me for sure and I found the exemplar the greatest gift when structuring my first attempt.
If you have time, feel free to check out my assessment one draft and let me know whether it makes sense here: https://accjourneywithjess.wordpress.com/2020/03/11/my-step-one-draft-is-here/
Happy blogging!
Jess
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